By Jen Bervin
In the late Eighties, poet David Antin had the beautiful idea to put some
poems in the sky via skywriting planes. His Sky Poems were originally intended
as a new form of epic poetry, both monumental and ephemeral, to be written in
installments in locations all across the United States over the span of a decade.
Only two poems have actually made it up so far, in Santa Monica and La Jolla,
California. The form is constrained by the writing capacity of the planes (18-23
letters per line) and the cost, $650 per line. It is also limited by the viewer’s
capacity to remember what has been written—the beginning of the line vanishes
as the end of it is being written. The following poems were written in response
to the question I posed to our class after we read about David Antin’s
project: what would you write in the sky if you could?
—Jen Bervin
DREAMING SOMEDAY YOU
WILL BREATHE ME IN
AND CALL ME HOME
By
Edmond H. Lee
Where:
Coney Island
When: a cloudless, still summer day
IF WE ARE THIS CLOSE
YET SO FAR SEPARATED
CAN WE EVER BE AS ONE?
By
Robert Ricca
IF LOVE IS CLOSE
THESE WORDS PAINT
YOUR JOY SKY-WIDE
By Marc Weissman

